英語課前三分鐘演講稿改錯 我的英語演講稿..幫我看看有沒有錯的..還有幾個單詞也幫我補上 Hello,dvery body.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story are very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin One day,the sky are black.And I was on my way home.suddenly,a hot girl come along.And she stood beside me.She say,"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I say"no".The the girl get angry and gei me a big 耳光.She say"no You 騙人"she cried and wet away. After the girl went away,T didn't move a think a moment.Mabe I am ... 不會結尾了..還有些單詞... 語法錯誤改改啊~有分++++ 我表現的是個笑話...

英語課前三分鐘演講稿改錯 我的英語演講稿..幫我看看有沒有錯的..還有幾個單詞也幫我補上 Hello,dvery body.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story are very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin One day,the sky are black.And I was on my way home.suddenly,a hot girl come along.And she stood beside me.She say,"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I say"no".The the girl get angry and gei me a big 耳光.She say"no You 騙人"she cried and wet away. After the girl went away,T didn't move a think a moment.Mabe I am ... 不會結尾了..還有些單詞... 語法錯誤改改啊~有分++++ 我表現的是個笑話...

Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about a story of mine.Someboydody say,the story is very funny.But I don't think so...Ok.Let's begin
One day,it was very dark outside(此處用black不太合適).And I was on my way home.Suddenly,a spicy girl came along.And she stood beside me and said:"Are you handsome?'Whithout hesitation,I said"No".Then the girl got angry and gave me a big slap on my face.She said"No !You are lying" she cried and went away.
After the girl went away,I didn't move but thought for a moment.Mabe I am
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